Alone, Late At Night Comments

I cant stop my mouth from bursting 'Hahahahaha'..lovely jokes...cleverly mind cheering :) hmm one more thing...who wanna help me now. i guess u coz i am hungry after read this...Lol, joking, nice write keep smiling! -Unwritten Soul

Three C's - clever, creative, classy. You had this reader hooked with the intriguing lines, then makes it end with wit - connecting one with the same insatiable 'desire' (for food) . Ouch.

nice poem, well done dear

This is great! Yeah, I thought it was cigarettes. I laughed out loud!

A discerning food lover just like my self and a very good poet as i hope to be well writen and love the teasing untill the end

I was fooled, too. Didn't have a clue what it was and kept trying to guess. An addictive read....couldn't put it down, ha ha. Love, Fran xx

Love it! Love it! Love it! I was forced to read it aloud to my companion, hiding the last line so he couldn't peek.

such wit, Mr Mahtrow right down to the cheesy voice of the advertiser in your head.

Hahahahaha...too cute! You had me fooled to the end. Dee