Saturday, August 18, 2012

Alone Is Better Comments

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theres rubble and ash where my soul used to be
put a chain and lock around my trust and threw
away the key.
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kathryn briones
trust
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Xelam Kan™ 21 October 2012

nice but hard to digest the 2nd stanza

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Leslie Philibert 18 August 2012

I have trouble with the grammar, although I like the poem. The first threw must be throw, the second threw must be through!

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kathryn briones

kathryn briones

Ancorage, Alaska
kathryn briones
kathryn briones
Ancorage, Alaska
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