Thursday, October 19, 2006

Alone In Thought Comments

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Jealousy shall tear your soul apart.
Stare with contempt, walking out of my life.
What we once shared, you quit and move on.
I just kept going, on and on.
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Lance Carthen
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Abigail Keller 19 October 2006

Wow, that was an incredible poem. Loved the lines: 'I feel the dropp of a grain of sand. The bottom of the hourglass outweighs the top' Fullo of emotion- great write. ~Amber~

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