Monday, December 24, 2007

Alone In This World Comments

Rating: 5.0

Day after day
this pain goes on
day after day
I still forge on
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shelbie bozeman
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Tom Bates 02 October 2009

short but its really good!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 September 2009

My pain is still trying and is still getting to me at days end so If you need someone to talk to I really need a friend........lovely poems and wht a words you hve put in with great courage wtih honest feelings...it is great poem...i liked it....10 read mine you go alone...real frineds..modern friends..real neighbour

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Kirsty Richards 01 February 2009

Wow. This is brill :)

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Jonathan Harris 16 September 2008

Everyone needs someone sometimes I like this poem. reminds me of me

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Kirsten Gray 09 February 2008

this is a really lovely poem and i kinda know how you feel

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