//// Alone In The Wind //// Comments

I love ur poem its wonderful :)

this poem is amazing. its so full of meaning, and so descriptive. its easy to get lost in this poem. nicely done :)

a great poem and one of the best I have read on this site! Claudia

A great poem, really worth reading.

I strongly admire your descriptions. They are very beautiful.

well written...great lines

beign a woman it touched to know what it feels to be a common woman...............expressed in such beautiful words...............thanx....'.just leave for her...her sad happiness'.

On second reading, that really sucked.

From a breathing spirit that spreads light and warmth and beauty

This is like a film or a painting with the rich colours and imagery. I admit I don't quite follow the story but what comes across is your compassionate embracing of life.

now i like, very touching, attached with of sadness. Bravo..... Keepthem coming, now i see why i must read your poems more often :)

Great write here of spiritual significance.Four women are quadruple like the tastes of life-bitter, sweet, sour, salt.But of the four, the rest three apart from sugar they have a cumulative effect so that people learn to fight with the stakes of life.Certainly the case of women who are singing their souls and hearts out coz` they have no weapons to fight for life-sometimes its money, another half or man-their individual losses and disgraces with austerities in life surmouting while they senescence.But life is like that-alone in the wind most of the time and therefore life hands in lemons.I did write in my poem-A Lemon also about the vicissitudes which live only in hopes with the wind until you live no more.Better we do not think of betterment.Best is we work like the machines which has no feeling when it is going to be down and not functioning anymore to be dismantled but not care for anything more.We need be hard therefore.Not ponder over distant fields of grass and daisies anymore like women living in utopia though i know they know their treacherous conditions.God will not solve this problem.Nor even Nature.They are themselves with their variations problems since ages of human life.Flowers dry on their own if plucked or not plucked-.They fall from the tree.The tree which so long mothers the flowers do not want to carry on.Thats law of nature.Doorless and windowless refers to houses being shelled on by the ongoing racial and religion conflicts.Solitude could be Palestine and eternity could well be Israels supported by US, that in Russian Federation the Chechnya units, then in the Soutern Slavonic state of former Yugoslavia where also windows and doors broke like the once so advancing Ottoman Empire.Time never takes one side only.Time will change.May be we do not live until then.We cannot hope and loose energy everyday.Somebody is there to estimate our time frames and limitations.Let the time decide. Very deep allusive write, sweet alliterations of music by the four women and exquisite poetry.Cheers.

This Poem Is magnificent, The imageries throughout were delightful, such an amazing poem, from such an amazing poet. :)

Very interesting poem. You have used many impressive metaphors here. I love this, beautiful writing.