Monday, December 11, 2006

Alone In The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walking alone in the rain
Hiding my tears
Trying not to show
Blending the tears with the rain
...
Read full text

selcan deniz
COMMENTS
alice sunderland 15 December 2006

well - you need to know that I know bugger-all about poetry. but i gotta say i liked this loads. loved the wording. loved the story. dont 'totally get' the end - but i reckon it's all the better for that! ! its a tenner from me. al.

0 0 Reply
Patricia Gale 14 December 2006

Full of thought... well done

0 0 Reply
Brandi Knecht 14 December 2006

nice i like it it has induviduality

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success