James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Wednesday, October 16, 2019

Alone In The Moment Waiting For You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Alone in the moment, I could not watch.
Those leaves
that you see are green and move gently
by the wind on the tree's.
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James McLain
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 October 2019

Those leaves are like feathers which carry freedom of hope and dignity of love. Nothing in writing is left as everything is very beautifully felt. Red roses turn into blue coming in contact with sky. Your poetic mind is explored well and this is an excellent poem.10

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Tulsi Shrestha 16 October 2019

Majestic display of words accompanied by metaphors. Intense and powerful expression.

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Kingsley Egbukole 16 October 2019

Sweet and beautiful poem

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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