Alone In The Dark Comments

good dear..so lovely..i can see myself in you and my love in yours. God bless you and your love Lisa. take care..

so tonight i wright and with god i hope. that i can close my eyes and wake up to your sweet smile. in the risen sun shine. darkness, lonliness and smiles..what a sweet indicators interrelating to each other.. like it..lte me share one of my famous say with you in this reagrad..hope you like it..(a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with..afzal shauq) means the idea of your poem here is different but our destination for getting smiles is same same..well done..10/10

loom night in the dark....a lone and lonely...pour out the emotion of fading light with tears dried in thew cheek..... the power faith move each solitaire to grow in the midst of uncertainty...just a single hope rebirth the power of you and my heart salute of your strength...my vow of joy in your soul....a great master piece of your poem....that move the whole world thank you and God bless....10 ++++++

wowwwwwwwww, Lisa you write so well i can't imagine, ok, keep it up.

You have an ability to use imagery and emotion to paint a picture of love. I would work on your spelling as it will help with your long term sucess as a writer. Best of luck