Monday, January 7, 2008

Alone In The Dark. Comments

Rating: 4.6

All alone in the pitch, black, frightening dark,
hearing fade, quiet whispers, back starts to ark,
walking quicker and faster, heart starts pumping,
with the knees and arms fail to stop thumping.
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Ricky Owen
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Roseann Shawiak 01 April 2015

Excellent write, can feel the fear grasping my heart. Great poem, thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Effie Yalena Steyn 09 January 2008

Strange, but I rather love the dark. Especially when I used to go surfing at night, there was nothing more welcoming than a black velvety sea. Although I share your sentiment, I was pretty scared sometimes. A great poem. XXX

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