Alone In The Crowd Comments

Determined to live on, with the coins habitually dropped into her stretched out hands by those sailing past her unobtrusive self.......touching expression with nice theme. A brilliant poem shared incisively.10

Another beautiful piece! This lady whom you so rivetingly describe: Determined to live on, with the coins habitually dropped into her stretched out hands by those sailing past her unobtrusive self. Like a monument of patience She sat. Sat, so alone! is perhaps not alone. That is aloneness - a supreme state. Great write, Valsa-ji. (10)

An impressive and touching poem.

So touching and so poignantly penned with soulful words......Valsa.....it really touched my heart....you are amazing

A soulful write of a helpless life..... very touching about being alone & helpless

The vivid imagery is touching and I feel so sorry for her! The poem evokes such tender feelings for the lonely woman.! !

Thanks Valsa, enjoyed reading this poem... the imagery has been powerfully built up

What I think about the woman portrayed here is this. As she is determined to live on, what we assume about her past and a world that might have been responsible for her projected misery have no entity henceforth. She is powerful and therefore leave a legacy ahead, one hopes.

an emotional drop.we are nothing but specks of dust in this vast cosmos.liked it.

I get an exact imagery of ur poem.such persons r illtreated and not cared by general people.you so caring poet n person.regards