Alone In My Darknees Comments

hazem, i understand what u want to portray here.(Just be careful for the words, hmn...) I can see u are a very good poet...nice thoughts, hazem!

That's a hot write, Good 1 Hazem

Hi Hazem......great poem, well expressed.....full of the darkness you have felt in your heart. It comes across very strongly. A great write. Love, Fran xx

Hey, this is a really great poem! I hope you don't feel alone like this..... Good day Dona

Great poem! I loved to read it!

Good poem, Makes you think.

Nice poem. But is this light love? Or the darkness is death? Would like to know.

Sounds like the shadows over me, nice work