the clouds cover my heart,
I am alone in hospital,
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i think feeling lonly is very painful, even everybody is around, still you are alone, & to mix it with feeling of fear to die. Great
Rasheed, I came to pay you a visit. This is a wonderful heartfelt poem. The pain of being sick or injured and in the hospital is compounded by lonliness. You graphically depict such pain of heart and then, the triumphant appearance of those you love. I think we, sometimes, underestimate the power of love in life. Even while experiencing pain, love is the best medicine on the planet. Praise God for love. Great write...Doug
Reminds me of the time I was in hospital... I felt the same way too...Great job!
A year back, I was in hospital and it seems it's very much my own feelings.