Saturday, April 18, 2009

Alone In Darkness Comments

Rating: 5.0

The darkness in the air looms,
As the fear comes, the tears start to comsume.
My body trembles and shakes as the world comes to a hault,
I shake in fear from the guilt in fault.
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Tiffany Wolf
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Naida Nepascua Supnet 10 October 2011

you are like EDGAR ALLAN POE in his TELL-TALE HEART you are amazing your poem is too

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James Mclain 21 May 2009

Some times it is hard to walk through halls of lite and dark in sound...iip

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marvelous write..symbolic and deep..amazing piece!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 April 2009

Beautiful writes from a beautiful young poetess! !

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Inner Whispers 21 April 2009

hmn...nice narration...i can feel the essence...

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You are never alone.. Nice poem! ! ! !

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