Friday, November 4, 2005

Alone In Ann Arbor Comments

Rating: 4.8

I walked alone
In Ann Arbor last night,
But you were
With me again on South Main
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Uriah Hamilton
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Tanya De Burgh 01 September 2020

Well written and sad

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Linda Ori 05 August 2006

And did you hang out at the Pretzel Bell? And yell 'GO BLUE! ' Lovely college town, Ann Arbor. Spent much of my life there - wonderful sentimental trip down memory lane. Thanks, Uriah! Linda

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Will Barber 14 May 2006

The solid image of a specific place is a foundation for a universal experience. The language is also elegant, I add. I liked the twinge when the reader realizes what 'you were with me' really means.

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Duncan Wyllie 09 March 2006

This is like looking through glass and seeing so much of the past.Lovely write.Love Duncan

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Joy Vanderhelm 31 December 2005

A lovely poem about love, Uriah. Sometimes a certain heartache becomes even more prevalant when we visit all those favorite hotspots without that special someone. Well done.

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Shannon Chapel 29 December 2005

Uriah, This is simply lovely! S

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***** ********* 13 November 2005

Great little poem of love Uriah. You are never alone when they are in your heart. Lucky girl, springs to mind. 10 from a lucky lady Tai

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Herbert Nehrlich1 11 November 2005

Well done, Uriah. Do you by any chance know a little place called Mesick (N of Ann Arbour) ? Best H

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Adryan Barnathan 08 November 2005

Uriah....been there...Anne Arbor....such beauty~

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Amberlee Carter 05 November 2005

this is such a lovely piece, filled with ache and nostalgic...excellent writing my friend.

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Lori Boulard 04 November 2005

great mood of longing and surrender at the same time. I like this.

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Sallie Howson 04 November 2005

i love this lonely poem

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Ivy Christou 04 November 2005

lovely poem.. Sometimes going to a known place alone tends to reminds you the person you went with the previous time you've visited it.. life is hard! HBH

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Raynette Eitel 04 November 2005

This is a universal feeling, Uriah. All of us stroll across some campus or some city street with a lover who is no longer in our life. It is a sweet, but empty feeling. Thanks for this.] Raynette

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Mary Nagy 04 November 2005

She must be a real angel to have stole your heart as she has Uriah....hopefully she'll come around. I love the poems with Michigan references, I could picture you strolling through my campus! Very romantic poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 04 November 2005

Such a sad romantic poem....very nice!

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