I walked alone
In Ann Arbor last night,
But you were
With me again on South Main
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And did you hang out at the Pretzel Bell? And yell 'GO BLUE! ' Lovely college town, Ann Arbor. Spent much of my life there - wonderful sentimental trip down memory lane. Thanks, Uriah! Linda
The solid image of a specific place is a foundation for a universal experience. The language is also elegant, I add. I liked the twinge when the reader realizes what 'you were with me' really means.
This is like looking through glass and seeing so much of the past.Lovely write.Love Duncan
A lovely poem about love, Uriah. Sometimes a certain heartache becomes even more prevalant when we visit all those favorite hotspots without that special someone. Well done.
Great little poem of love Uriah. You are never alone when they are in your heart. Lucky girl, springs to mind. 10 from a lucky lady Tai
Well done, Uriah. Do you by any chance know a little place called Mesick (N of Ann Arbour) ? Best H
this is such a lovely piece, filled with ache and nostalgic...excellent writing my friend.
great mood of longing and surrender at the same time. I like this.
lovely poem.. Sometimes going to a known place alone tends to reminds you the person you went with the previous time you've visited it.. life is hard! HBH
This is a universal feeling, Uriah. All of us stroll across some campus or some city street with a lover who is no longer in our life. It is a sweet, but empty feeling. Thanks for this.] Raynette
She must be a real angel to have stole your heart as she has Uriah....hopefully she'll come around. I love the poems with Michigan references, I could picture you strolling through my campus! Very romantic poem. Sincerely, Mary
Well written and sad