Alone In A Million Crowd? Comments

Really a poignant bit of verse written with clarity of thought. Very heartfelt with strong emotions Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

Really a poignant bit of verse written with clarity of thought. Very heartfelt with strong emotionss Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

আছে আছে সবখানে দিকে দিকে চারদিকে পরিপূর্ন আছে তবুও নেই নেই আমার কিছুই এ বেলায়; ও বেলায় এত ভিড়ে অপূর্ন আমি তুমি হীনে

goodly written the poem is good 10++

It is beautiful poem on love having thrilling expression. Lovers and beloveds can't live separately is the main theme of this poem. Let me quote some lines... But your face like a ocean of grief... Take me down Drop me inside; Thousand i tried to forget you, I tried to close my eyes, Your word whispers in my ear's Baby i can't live widout you I will surely die.... Thanks for sharing this poem.

It is the third poem on the same topic read by me in last two days. Knowing pretty well that the lovers cannot live without each other, they are often driven by selfish motives and try to undermine the status of the other partner. This becomes so painful. Efforts for reconciliation don't work out. Thanks. Your word whispers in my ear's / Baby i can't live widout you I will surely die.... When even i know dat; Its all over

But your face like a ocean of grief... Take me down Drop me inside; Thousand i tried to forget you, I tried to close my eyes, Your word whispers in my ear's Baby i can't live widout you I will surely die.... loneliness in the crowd. your love and your desire and finally all is gone. despair, love, rejection perhaps. all such human feelings you have brought in, in this poem. thank you very much

This is not your singular experience Ruby! Often we pass through stages of ups and down. At times we feel very lonely in life or feel very low! That's all quite natural. But we should never allow that state of mind to linger long. At the earliest, we should get out of it and come into sunshine and cheer! A very poignant write!

Yeah many times I read this poem to know the truth of the love I wants to think how it provokes the reality of the love the master piece of this poem is surrounding around the love the crowd & road both are imitating the false love because it is already broken the body which subjugated such kind of love have utterly broken hence it tries to halt the breath. But still there is gape to turn again which symbolises the words like clouded, sky again the feeling of inside the tears after deep loses expression Tec the tears itself is remedy for our sorrows. Some quantity os sad will be cured by it. But I don't want to make too glamurous of the love love must be there for some extent but it is the lasting in our life. it is good poem Some thing good we can grasp from it. I love to read your works always. And also I love to write critics on you work. Because it feeds me so thing good Thanks a lot

Ruby it's a wonderful poem............................10

Tumi ki kado? Tobe je akash ato brishti jhoray...... A beautiful two liner.

Swimming in the sea of sadness yet a significant solo of loneliness! Well done my friend!

we all have these feelings from time to time. but all is not lost. nice write

Its like confession with high degree of commotion but in spite of negativity the positiveness -immensity thank a lot its a philosophical poem 10