She wanders through the crowd
It is as though she wasn't even there
No one acknowledges her presence
She is but a breath of air.
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There is nothing more painful As being alone in a crowd Nothing so crushing As having no voice...................sentiments common to oh! so many in this busy, buzy buzzing world today! nice write.
i loved this poem! i think everyone must feel like that at some point
Beautiful simply wonderfully put of how one can feel, , , I must admit that there are times that I wish to be 'alone' in that crowd, by choice, , , , but then there are the oh so many times that one wishes that perhaps just one kind smile or hand would reach out....A smile, a touch, could save a heart from breaking at times and the giver would not even know what they had done...People are just too scared to reach out I think or hardened by their own pain.....another 100 here..marci m. :)
Alison, as always Beautifully done..loved it....is so true! ! ! Kim
I know the feeling Alison, this was a great piece you wrote here, really liked it a lot.
You are noticed and not alone This crowd gathers to hear you voice We stand here in awed silence For as you speak we have no choice
I love this poem Alison, describes perfectly the way I feel many a time.