Thursday, November 23, 2006

Alone In A Crowd Comments

Rating: 5.0

She wanders through the crowd
It is as though she wasn't even there
No one acknowledges her presence
She is but a breath of air.
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Alison Smith
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fleur de lys 14 March 2010

I love this poem Alison, describes perfectly the way I feel many a time.

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Malini Kadir 13 April 2007

There is nothing more painful As being alone in a crowd Nothing so crushing As having no voice...................sentiments common to oh! so many in this busy, buzy buzzing world today! nice write.

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Jeanette Krantz 15 March 2007

i loved this poem! i think everyone must feel like that at some point

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Marci Made 11 March 2007

Beautiful simply wonderfully put of how one can feel, , , I must admit that there are times that I wish to be 'alone' in that crowd, by choice, , , , but then there are the oh so many times that one wishes that perhaps just one kind smile or hand would reach out....A smile, a touch, could save a heart from breaking at times and the giver would not even know what they had done...People are just too scared to reach out I think or hardened by their own pain.....another 100 here..marci m. :)

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dgdftghdrth drydrtyrt 09 February 2007

Alison, as always Beautifully done..loved it....is so true! ! ! Kim

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Jim Foulk 09 February 2007

I know the feeling Alison, this was a great piece you wrote here, really liked it a lot.

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Tony Adams 24 January 2007

You are noticed and not alone This crowd gathers to hear you voice We stand here in awed silence For as you speak we have no choice

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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