Friday, October 10, 2014

Alone In A Crowd Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life is blowing drop by drop,
Death is growing drop by drop,
Fields I'm plowing one by one,
Alone in a crowd next to none!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kevin Patrick 19 October 2014

It is the cruelty of life that we must suffer, and even crueller that we suffer alone, your thoughtful words are deeply poignant as they are melancholic, this bares a hard hitting feel that I understand to well. It speaks to me and for that I love it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 12 October 2014

slowly slowly we are becoming jungly, and every one fears with other think tha day we will fear with our shadow..we are fearing with it but less

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Salini Nair 12 October 2014

awesome.............i like each line...............

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Ramesh Rai 10 October 2014

A poet is always alone.Loved your emotional thought.

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Khalida Bano Ali 10 October 2014

A thoughtful sad poem, sweetest are the sad songs and this poem is a model of sweetness.

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Elena Sandu 10 October 2014

Loved this poem, I was carried by it in both ways could follow its wisdom and dance by its flow. Yes a bit sad indeed, wonder if it could be the otherwise for loneliness to bring the thoughts.

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Neela Nath Das 10 October 2014

To be alone in crowd is the characteristic feature of some people.I think poets are more sensitive than the common guys.Loved reading.

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