Friday, July 7, 2006

Alone In A Castle (Part Two) Comments

Rating: 5.0

A cold wind blows the trees,
Shadows blacken the sky.
There's a falling of Autumn leaves.
The princess lies down to cry.
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Lesa MRK
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Charmaine Simpson 31 August 2006

This completed it for me Lesa - I have a son - the one person I have loved and believe will always love - is the father of my child. I am unable to let go of everything we once shared. This poem is amazing - beautiful - sad - perfect. Charmaine x

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Preeti - is here! 10 July 2006

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I loved the imagery. Gosh..its as if i am the princess here....atleast the princess has the biggest rememberance! ! Preets

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James S. 08 July 2006

Part 2 just as amazing as the first! I love your poems. You use your words to paint the perfect picture for what your trying to say. I do believe i'm inlove with you after reading that! Incredible job. :)

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Patricia Gale 07 July 2006

BRAVO! I bow to you, your imagery fantastic, leaving behind the biggest memory! Her love never to fade now! OUTSTANDING!

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Davency Leroy 07 July 2006

OH MY! LOve it! ! ! ! ! (The imagery is perfect)

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