Alone In A Castle (Part One) Comments

Well this one made me cry Lesa - my heart had already dropped into the pit of my stomach from your last poem, and then this - You have described so well what this pain and loss feels like - your imagery is perfect, and then the closing verse just stole my emotion completely - I truly loved this piece. Charmaine x

Lesa, Firstly i like this poem because it tells a story. Secondly it's sad this seperation and every princess has gone through it once in her life....now i'm off to read part 2. Preets

Absolutley amazing Lesa. I love this work. Haven't read the 2nd part i was too excited to tell you how great this was. I'm not a princess or anything but still an awesome piece to make you think. Great job.

Lovely, splendid, sad but yet I know the feeling of her pain. Well done!