Monday, February 12, 2018

Alone I Raised Thee Comments

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Child of mine, my womb did glee,
Upon the eyes thath looketh back at me.
Thy first touch with half opened eye,
Ah! my darling did maketh me smile.
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Shanika marini Paul
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Ramesh Nonis 02 November 2022

Your thoughts are beautifully articulated. Superb

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Shanika Paul Paul 13 March 2018

My poetry is my voice of tears and joy enjambed thanks for your comments

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 20 February 2018

Although I have read a lot of your poems, your style of writing is bit unfamiliar to me, Nevertheless, I enjoyed this touching poem to the best. I really touched the mother's love you garnished it with. Wonderful Shanika. Thanks for sharing. X

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Shanika marini Paul

Shanika marini Paul

Colombo, Srilanka
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