Wednesday, August 19, 2009

Alone Home Comments

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and I do not know where are you
why do not give a sign of life
quiet of ice, whirl thoughts
from which a flower takes your face
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Marieta Maglas 27 August 2009

excellent poem, very well written.....10+++++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2009

and I do not know where are you why do not give a sign of life thousands of thoughts in mind at discomfort and not giving pleasere at all....very good idea and theme....10 read mine a place callled home...... you go alone

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