Saturday, December 20, 2008

...Alone But Willing... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Writing this words brings smile to my heart
Before i meet you i was alone but willing
I my wildest dream you would
take me in when it was chilling
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Fading Heart
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Angeline Snowboy 29 December 2008

this is very touching keep it up ur poems are much better than mine! take care..

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June Feir-Cruz 23 December 2008

Darling, you are too young to be thinking about being a wife: but, it is a lovely poem but make sure you proof read, okey? Lots of room for improvement. I love it just the same.

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Absolutely lovely.10++++

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Nicely written Emmajoy ' KRISTA

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Matt Sawler 21 December 2008

not bad really nice could use a spell check think i dunno though

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angel unknown 20 December 2008

hes not yers sorry not get a life.! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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glad to hear the young speak of being a wife.. just for that I applaud you.. good job!

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