In all my defeat you alone stood beside
My world of blunder seek in you a guide
When everyone headed for their own way
You opened a new window of ally each day
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wonderful, i must say it just shook me. nice rhymes and the tune was fine. a pleasant read. keep writing.
Wow! It seem very realistic..straight 4m heart..well written..loved it
In your light I've learned the lessons of life Proudly I spread this message as a martyr’s wife m i reading a poem or facing some reality. well penned well versed bt last line compelled me to think more a poet/poetess is never alone two things r always with him/her.shadow n thoughts.one is past another is future. humble write keep writing. may god bless u.
wow. good write. impressive. i loved the last few lines. keep penning i invite you to read & comment on my poems.
Beautiful poem you have really chosen your words well. Keep up Soumista