Fredoneth Jonelas

Fredoneth Jonelas

Centro Poblacion, Culasi,5708 Antique, Philippines
Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Alone And Will Be Comments

Rating: 5.0

The night is so cool
Sea breeze stroll
Calmness i feel
Peaceful is real
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Fredoneth Jonelas
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Vipins Puthooran 29 September 2012

excellent poem/good rhythm and rhyme! ! ! !

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Kelvin Owusu 28 September 2012

an excellent piece, great description of an expressed loneliness, a good read

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Erika Wingo 28 September 2012

What a wonderful poem. I love the rhythym and it's the way it flows together.

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Darkangel Flyfree 28 September 2012

Wow, you expess loneliness so well! Great poem, really enjoyed it!

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Words' Knight 28 September 2012

a perfect song that express the tone of loneness, nice, and bright writting, keep on writting brother.

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Simon Odhiambo 28 September 2012

good poem. So real and well put.

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Fredoneth Jonelas 28 September 2012

Thank you for the compliment. I just expressed my feelings every time I'm alone.

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 September 2012

Written in an exquisite manner..i liked it

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Fredoneth Jonelas

Fredoneth Jonelas

Centro Poblacion, Culasi,5708 Antique, Philippines
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