The night is so cool
Sea breeze stroll
Calmness i feel
Peaceful is real
                
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an excellent piece, great description of an expressed loneliness, a good read
What a wonderful poem. I love the rhythym and it's the way it flows together.
Wow, you expess loneliness so well! Great poem, really enjoyed it!
a perfect song that express the tone of loneness, nice, and bright writting, keep on writting brother.
Thank you for the compliment. I just expressed my feelings every time I'm alone.

 
                     
                
excellent poem/good rhythm and rhyme! ! ! !