Thursday, December 11, 2008

Alone And Torn Comments

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Stuck in a corner, or so it feels
Struck into dark, my light conceals
Snuck on past, past the repeals
Tuck my mind, depressing ideals
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Izik Alcox
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Ashlea Pearson 12 December 2008

When I read Dream girl i thought that would be my favorite by you, until i read this one. I can relate to it, and it makes sense. You speak deep, and I like that about you.

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Drishti Magoo 12 December 2008

one of the finest poems of yours...the poem carries the potency of expressing the misery and darkness u go through... as if just at the brink of some tightly held n suppresed and... just at the very line that u could have crossed.. u have stopped yourself there...your very intention of controlled and restricted structure aptly reveals something which is not controllable... but why your solitude is not the comfort zone this time? i didnt want to expect this from you because i was relying on you for this aspect! hope u understand wat m saying. tc, get going!

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