Wednesday, January 9, 2008

Alone And Lonely Comments

Rating: 5.0

She ran towards me
On her face was a huge glee
She looked at her mummy and plead
“I want him mummy” she said
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sania harris
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Ershad Mazumder 16 October 2008

Thanks a lot for such a feeling.

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Ojedokun, Adeola 07 October 2008

Nice....couldn't hold back my smile. It's a lovely piece

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 September 2008

Very nice poem with nice ending, love it.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 10 September 2008

Hello Sania. You had my attention and you gave a very good ending. Great read! Loyd

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Fay Slimm 08 September 2008

What a surprise ending Sania. Very well thought out and a touching poem. Ten from me.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 September 2008

Oh I am touched! ! ..............10

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David Threadgold 02 September 2008

Hi Sania. A very touching piece of verse well done keep writting you clearly have a talent for it. a well earned 10.

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