She ran towards me
On her face was a huge glee
She looked at her mummy and plead
“I want him mummy” she said
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Hello Sania. You had my attention and you gave a very good ending. Great read! Loyd
What a surprise ending Sania. Very well thought out and a touching poem. Ten from me.
Hi Sania. A very touching piece of verse well done keep writting you clearly have a talent for it. a well earned 10.
Thanks a lot for such a feeling.