Thursday, June 11, 2009

Alone And Homely Comments

Rating: 4.5

I am alone as a woman could be
Is there a man who could ever love me
I question and wonder what it’s all about
Until my questions are all shouted out
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Jennifer Conrad
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Deborah Cromer 24 June 2009

I like your rhymes. You write and tell a tale. Your lines all become what you are trying to say, and the end just rhymes so nicely. I was surprised to see only 2 poems posted though? I was ready to read more. You are invited and welcome to read my rhymes too if you'd like? I'll be looking for more of your poetry. It's nice to read rhymes that tell a story. You have a way of getting the reader's attention! Good job. Deborah Cromer

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Elsa Bennett 11 June 2009

I like this poem. I'm sure it's something many women have felt at some point and you've reflected those feelings perceptively and clearly, nice write. Thanks.

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