Monday, March 19, 2007

Alone And Helpless Comments

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Alone
Crying all alone while you walk away.
Feeling naked and helpless,
After telling you all my secrets.
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Mahfooz Ali
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Lovleen Walia 30 November 2008

really a nice poem sir...

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Lyly Dye 29 August 2007

i love this poem. its like you can picture these exact moments happening.

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Syed Ali Sagar 24 June 2007

The Most two difficult things in life are First, Living with principles.And, Living alone.....When You come to solitary stage...then Capital princple of life gone......Even in dark(Dark days too) Shadow also leave from you. I smelled Nothing Serious in your poem But Important....dear.

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Tahmina Javed Subzposh 12 April 2007

Mahfooz this is Ayesha(ogga) , No U are not alone. We are with U.

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Chhavi Anupam 22 March 2007

Knowing I am willingly throwing my life away. great senstivity portrayed. Chhavi

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Aashish Ameya 22 March 2007

These moments are really horrifying…but when we are naked….we are ready to wear divine rob..

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Mahfooz Ali

Mahfooz Ali

Lucknow (U.P.) India
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