Alone, Alone Comments

Wow! What an intense poem of struggle and ending up proving yourself. Loneliness and being alone can be so devasting to a human being. You described the battle within very well, my stomach was in knots while reading it. This poem touched the very within of my soul. Great poem! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

Ask the stars to lend some of his light. beautiful write.

its dark, but great. I read it as a fight to be noticed and a struggle ending with proving yourself.

woderful poem thats it :)

the poem is so nice...its so meaningfull and perfectly describes what the one feels when he is alone...and you use no difficult expressions of English language which makes is better and better....very very good work friend...deserves appreciation! !

i like that poem so much cause i feel i'am alone..it's so true and it encourage me to fight.good job.

A courageous challenge should help you from loneliness....nice write10

sadly one, , , yes it is.. sadly and well penned.. its so hard to live among all while you feel a loneliness, , beautiful one.. hazem al..

the estrangement forms a pic, a wired pic No one can see, except me I like this part of the stanza as it is enigmatic of my present life which will be past tomorrow.But you have tread all this past, present and future and everything alone that comes your way until you are not alone anymore...finding someone or uniting with God.

What really matters is that you need to prove yourself. Beautiful write.

Cry Cry Cry.....that's what i read here..............your poems depicts the same theme..yea you are alone.......all are alone..........what's new..............What really matters that ' i tried to prove myself '............be ready for fight......dont say i am having blue and i dont have a clue..........and no one is here to woo........Just say I shall fight.....Good Write.....