Alone Again Comments

Deep, sad poem. Interesting, subtle rhyming scheme that I really like. It's not an obvious rhyming scheme like most poems. I've always thought using textbook poetic devices like rhyming help a poem flow and roll off the tongue easier. It also makes them more aesthically pleasing. When I first read this poem, I realized it was rhyming, but waen't completely obvious where.

A very impressive and heart touching poem I never believed in you but god save me or slay me but do not leave me here alone again. These lines show you are a believer, sometimes we complain God but have no alternate but to ask Him to cure our sickness and to heal our wounds.

Dear Lucy, How I thank you for your words. AS this was written in 2012 I would really like to know how you are going now. I too like Kelly could really feel your emotion. May you be seeing light in this new day.

...........depression strikes many people....the poet was courageous to write such a poem....congratulations on member poem of the day...

This is a dark poem. Yet, it was very well-written. Thanks for sharing.

pain of lonely ness expressed so well. Dark side of mind inflicting pain upon itself against the better judgement of faith and reasoning.

So dark a dark space that this takes one too and i think most of us visit there once or twice but eventually when least expected the sun does shine again, i found it really interesting you chose cloud four, obviously not even half way to cloud nine, where oh where did the nine originate and how significant does that make your chosen figure. The release of internal pain by external inflicted wounds is one i do understand but wish i didnt... i so hope you come out the other side soon, i really do...tyvm karen

EXTREMELY WELL WRITTEN, a voice from the inner dark side of existence, isolation

I can almost feel your pain through your words. So powerful

pain expressed at its best i can almost feel it.

A sentimental tone! What a genuinely drawn expression! Beautiful, though the feeling you are drawing is so saddening! Being alone in this world of...... is so heavy!