Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Alone Again Comments

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I'm the wind, I have to blow
Across the seas, I have to go

Leaving you behind is painful
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Deepthi Vincent
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 July 2010

‘Across the seas, I have to go I’m the wind, I have to blow’ ~ finest imagery and concept and the carried till the last two lines where it reached the climax…wonderfully poetic… thanks for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Kesav Easwaran 07 June 2010

unique write...love that vanishes in the thin air...well, your usage of wind as the poetic symbol to blow off your grief is artistic...creative poetry...10

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Preetam Shetty 28 May 2010

You touched me with your marvellous job with words....10+

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Sreejith Kulaparambil 20 May 2010

really touching the heart cos i too never want to part...... your poem is just the best, it took my memories along with its gust. wow, i loved it.......

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Dr.subhendu Kar 19 May 2010

Across the seas, I have to go I’m the wind, I have to blow.......................................evocative and passionate, yet curved ingeniously,10++, . thanks for sharing

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