I'm the wind, I have to blow
Across the seas, I have to go
Leaving you behind is painful
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unique write...love that vanishes in the thin air...well, your usage of wind as the poetic symbol to blow off your grief is artistic...creative poetry...10
really touching the heart cos i too never want to part...... your poem is just the best, it took my memories along with its gust. wow, i loved it.......
Across the seas, I have to go I’m the wind, I have to blow.......................................evocative and passionate, yet curved ingeniously,10++, . thanks for sharing
‘Across the seas, I have to go I’m the wind, I have to blow’ ~ finest imagery and concept and the carried till the last two lines where it reached the climax…wonderfully poetic… thanks for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10