Monday, January 11, 2010

Alone Again Comments

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give me fire,
give me wind,
forgive me father
for i have sinned.
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charlotte marie peachey
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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 25 January 2010

Give me some shine, give me some rain Give me a chance to grow up once agiain U wlll surely get light. But ur rhyming should be more mature. No extra effort for rhyming, Try to maintain rhythm. That is possible. Mere rhyming without solid support of thoughts,

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Ency Bearis 12 January 2010

good write...nice to read all through.....10

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