Thursday, May 1, 2008

Alone Again Comments

Rating: 4.6

Lost in a world I call my own
Alone in a place that I called home
Loneliness in a crowded room
An empty heart, smells no perfume!
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Bob Gibson
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Cynthia Buhain-baello 03 December 2009

A wonderful poem even though the subject is sad and hard to accept. For one who has been 'alone' not because of death but because of departure, I find 'alone' a relief rather than a source of loneliness: -) and enjoy myself because of poetry. For the writer here who has lost a love so cherished, I marvel at the tender endearments woven in this poem and consider the piece well-thought of, an honor to have it shared here for us to read, and a work of art in itself because of its masterful rendition.10 ++++++++++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 June 2009

'I'm battle worn, from fighting so long Loneliness now is a familiar song When we were together, love of my life! I stood behind you through trouble and strife' Wonderful composition, love it.

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Kongolia Vang 24 December 2008

Such a poem of grace...Love is mere dream that's wat you showed me...

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Jathin Aka Jesuzz 26 November 2008

so true...stole a peice of my emotions......which i thought was my own...great great work

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Bonnie Collins 12 September 2008

Bob, this is an excellent desription of a world that seems so all alone at times.. This is really written with so many emotions, it leaves the reader wanting to reach out and hug you! ! ! Very good.... Bonnie

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Fay Slimm 10 August 2008

A heart-tugger Bob. Beautifully expressed. Keep those fine descriptions of emotive subjects right there in your work, because you excell at it. Greetings from Fay Slimm Corwall. U.K.

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Andrew Blakemore 09 July 2008

An excellent poem Bob, you have really captured the sadness of a broken relationship. Best wishes, Andrew

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..Beautiful poem Bob..I too share your lonliness...then I see you and many...I don`t feel lonely any more Bob.Keep your pen wet ever.

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Kesav Easwaran 07 May 2008

a poem...introspective...remorseful... expressive... a sad one but a very good one to read...

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Kim Schilling 03 May 2008

Keep your spirit up, Bob!

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