Saturday, March 1, 2008

! ! Alone A Waft Of Soft Delight Comments

Rating: 3.0

About a sharp and lonely moon
Among the sea of stars and clouds
A smileless sigh, a doleful look
Alone, alack! a wail anon.
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Raveendran N.V.
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Sandra Fowler 24 March 2008

Night music. Deep, blue, pensive and memorable. Song of the solitary soul. Lovely, Raveendran. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 09 March 2008

This is simply gorgeous, Raveendran. Outstanding, in fact. Lyrical, rhythmical, wistful and quite charming. A love affair with night methinks. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Tsira Goge 07 March 2008

Raveendran, ' A swing, a sweep, across the deep A sky above. a sky below ' I liked this poems. Melodic and fine metaphors admires the reader... Kindest regards... Tsira

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Vidyadhar ... 01 March 2008

good rhyme and rhytm....I like it

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