About a sharp and lonely moon
Among the sea of stars and clouds
A smileless sigh, a doleful look
Alone, alack! a wail anon.
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This is simply gorgeous, Raveendran. Outstanding, in fact. Lyrical, rhythmical, wistful and quite charming. A love affair with night methinks. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Raveendran, ' A swing, a sweep, across the deep A sky above. a sky below ' I liked this poems. Melodic and fine metaphors admires the reader... Kindest regards... Tsira
Night music. Deep, blue, pensive and memorable. Song of the solitary soul. Lovely, Raveendran. Warmest regards, Sandra