Alone? Comments

Alone but, still active! Thanks for sharing.

You are not alone, God is with you all the time, great one O G, I invite you to read and write mine

This honestly had me in tears within the first two stanzas. Your descriptive skills are impeccable and then I burst out laughing as the traffic warden slithered by lol hahaha! Perfect Then you tinker on the lost (addicts) and nearly lost (policeman) . This made me picture Padstow my heaven. And finally you settled neatly back on you which became us the observer in silent reverence. I rarely and I mean rarely ask but plz consider reading beach life as to me it is my moment such as yours in a far less picturesque area. This is far better than mine but just feel you might enjoy it a bit. Ty

You are a lovely storyteller: ^) This poem has a lilting rhythm...very cool and illustrative: ^)

A good poem, with fun in it too!

Love the rhyming, the beach and love being alone, Thank you

I was sitting right next to him while reading your poem. Great job.

A very positive ending.. liked it so much... we all sometimes need some time alone... its also a part of life...

a nice calm good write

quite interesting poem! nice!

Very good pom... nice rhyming and flow... Terry

The critical difference between being alone and being lonely, well penned.