i feel like I'll die alone
just like that on my own
why we're only friends
cant we stop our friend-zone
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The feeling of loneliess It can be so strong And yet if we just try to count to count our remaining blessings we may never feel alone again
I like the couplet when you just let the rhyme scheme go, with fun and popcorn... rhyming is good, but it can be a bit of a chain round a poet's neck. Well - you've made something good out of a sad experience...
really fantastic.... i love the lines its like everything turned to a stone and i broke it with a dinosaur bone good work! ! »so close«
Loved this one. Don't let your isolation overpower you. Let your pen be your friend
loved your poem.......deep thoughts that evoke my heart are put into this poem.lovely
Anni, I liked this piece, but my dear, you are wrong... you are not alone. Please, read my words, and you will understand this... ;) -Kelly.
You're not alone dear. Sometimes the situations force us to feel so. But its not so. Keep up your head high and walk like there's nobody like you and never under estimate yourself. This was a nice piece. Take care.