Wednesday, January 18, 2017

Alone Comments

Rating: 4.8

Poisoned dead butterflies
Fluttering in the pit of your stomach
Weighing you down
Until darkness becomes all you know
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Lauren C
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Practicing Poetess 26 September 2017

A painfully poignant poem, painting a picture of profound aloneness. Like Carol, I also award this one a '10'. Watch your points begin to climb!

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Carol Nichols 18 January 2017

I love everything about this poem. You did an awesome job portraying the pain of being alone.10+

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