Thursday, October 10, 2013

Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Alone:
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I lived with you, I sang with you
I danced, dined, spent nights with you.
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 04 January 2015

Came back and reread this heart-rending poem, Amitava! It really touches the interior pain of losing someone you have loved. Your pain is felt very intensely through this poem and my heart continues to go out to you. Hoping that some happiness has seeped into your life through family and friends. RoseAnn

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Kirti Sharma 31 May 2014

The feeling of loneliness can really kill.. Knowing that there are many people around, but not the one you loved, The life doesn't seems worth living...

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 26 May 2014

Hello Amitava. This was a well written, but sad romantic poem, lots of colorful language and great imagery. Thanks for your recent review of my work. Loyd

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Erika Wingo 01 May 2014

A stark portrait of the depths of loneliness once love is lost...full of raw heartache.

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Lonliness is very fearful and and very dull and therefore the subject is important and poem relevant.

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Tsohgeht Sheehy 05 January 2014

The words made you feel like you were experiencing it as the reader..great poem.

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Roseann Shawiak 05 January 2014

Got a feeling of emptiness when reading this poem. So bereft, - not even a child can make me smile - my heart goes out to you. Have felt this way myself, it's difficult to come back, it takes so long to get through the feelings of loneliness and emptiness. It seems to never end. Eventually, come around slowly, afraid of being hurt again. Wonderful expression of the pain of love gone away. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Heather Wilkins 30 October 2013

love is a very hard to describe. If can be good or it can be bad. the poet has given good images on the subject.

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Patricia Grantham 19 October 2013

Loneliness can be very painful at times. We have to force ourselves out of hat situation and live again. There is a bright light around the corner. Reach for it! Nicely written.

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Valsa George 19 October 2013

When the loved one goes away or is separated, it is so natural that life turns suddenly colourless and bland.. But we have to find a way out! Your sense of loneliness and disorientation, movingly presented!

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Lyn Paul 11 October 2013

It is so hard when your world has stopped. But you have to pick up the pieces. Beautiful words

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