Alone Comments
Home alone,
Silent walls,
Crept breathe,
Thirsty,
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Nicely done. The imagery is vivid and match the title. Lol thanks for shari.g such lovely poem
Lovely portrayal of loneliness. You're a beautiful lady Anzelyne, lovely picture of you. Thanks for sharing.
Even the picture agrees with the poem, i observed it. Thank you for sharing.
Loaded with a lonliness that leaps and longs for love. A compelling composition!
Thirsty, Drunken, Dehydrated, A quiver of hallucinations, and finally seduced to a dance.... like your poem very much. dev
So many people are suffering from loneliness. May be due to broken relationship or home. Can feel the pain of loneliness in the lines.
Loneliness can be a devastating state of mind, it fills us with haunting thoughts of insanity. Just walking out the door and looking to nature can give a breath of fresh air, renewing our spirit interiorly and giving us hope in tomorrow. Wonderful imagery and insight! 10++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Yes, life can be like that at times, but there is hope for a change in the future, so don't give up hope! And remember, a little prayer might help!
Yeah i understand that...it happened to me millions time...but dont be afraid to keep writing, because from here we can learn
Hi dear, in a whole poem is all boldly tell about how it felt when being alone and attacked by loneliness feeling..it just accurate....I have nothing to against you dear Anzelyne, but like me maybe you also rushing to write without checking...dehydration and hallucination...whatever it is, its a nice work!
Sometimes I've to jackle between English and German for a year now I've been speaking Germany mostly Infact, here at PH I'm in touch with the language.
silent walls, alone, drunk and at the same time dehydrated seduced to a dance insanity? These are all my experience too it is normal when u are away from home living in a foreign nation.. courage! ! ! boldness! ! ! face lif as it aers. remember you havelt to achieve. God bless you. tony
H! i Tony, sometimes you feel like you in your own world, but then life has to go on, alone or not.Thanks for your comment I'm overwhelmed.
loneliness finds a nice presentation in the poem, thanks for sharing
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An excellent depiction of a depraved state of mind. Wonderful poem! Many greetings, Paul