Wednesday, November 18, 2009

Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the dark
I cant see anything
No noises
No movements
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Allison Unknown
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Vinod Kumar 25 November 2009

Nice work, while in the darkness we closed our eyes deeply there would be opened another world, thanks 10+

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Evaughn Gray 24 November 2009

This is a good poem, I liked it. ~ Hazel Green Eyes ^.^

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Robbie Squires 24 November 2009

This is very good because it made me think. If you can't see it how do u know it's there? The same goes for darkness, if u can't see anything how do u know where ur at? Very good job

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Sherbanu Molu 20 November 2009

wow fantastic, looks like she really is allonnnnnnnne!

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Joseph Poewhit 18 November 2009

Words have an eerie being about alone

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