A fallen angel found on the ground,
Her broken wings folded around her,
Her halo bent and broken,
She was left to die.
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A stray-death in the inhumane street....very well penned
an imagery painted very emotional...it tells a lot of the pain and grief inside this lonely angelic death...good work...10
This sad poem expresses great emotion of pain & lonliness. Great job! I think we can all relate to this story at some time in our lives when we have felt truly alone. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem/story with us. Ravensong.
The angel's death is sorrowful and poem is neatly expressed the feeling.