Friday, October 2, 2009

Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

A fallen angel found on the ground,
Her broken wings folded around her,
Her halo bent and broken,
She was left to die.
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Ocean Myranda
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The angel's death is sorrowful and poem is neatly expressed the feeling.

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Heather Wilkins 31 August 2013

very emotional and painful write good read

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Ocean Myranda 07 September 2011

Thank you to all of you!

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Indira Renganathan 13 October 2009

A stray-death in the inhumane street....very well penned

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Kesav Easwaran 03 October 2009

an imagery painted very emotional...it tells a lot of the pain and grief inside this lonely angelic death...good work...10

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Jean Dament 03 October 2009

This sad poem expresses great emotion of pain & lonliness. Great job! I think we can all relate to this story at some time in our lives when we have felt truly alone. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem/story with us. Ravensong.

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Tharindu Atukorala 03 October 2009

WOW! ! ! truly emotional! 10 +++++

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