Goodbyes at the open front door
On a Sunday morning in Summer;
An aeroplane shines in the sun;
At home I can learn about solitude.
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excellent lines with profound simplicity sir. keep growing. lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s
This is a beautiful poem of life and of being, of noticing all of life all around. Very wonderful.
It is the grace of solitude that enables me to estimate the beauty of everything and return to my creativity.Thanx.
Very lovely ideas and well-expressed thoughts, images and ending up with a brilliant last line. Beautiful poem.10+
I remember my childhood movie 'Lonely are the brave'. Sad indeed Matt, solitary travels from the cradle to the burial place with us.
‘I have returned to the lap of creation’ ~ smooth touch down… Loneness looms showers luminescence …nice imagery 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK
A very beautiful poem with nice imagery...Loneliness, pain and grief create better poets and more eloquent hearts..
It is good to be alone sometimes Matt..I too enjoy it as I did this work.. thank you for the invite regards Alf
I read new art of yours ALONE and found so impressive. Matt! the following lines of your art I’m welcomed in home by the dogs And a friendly telephone caller; My daughter awakes at it’s ringing; Once again my world is revolving resounded in my mind for long. The loved Pet animal you see...how loyal to his master it called its master home to tell something important. also it shows your trust towards animals and respect their metaphorical sound or the look. Read worthy piece of art.10+++ May I draw your attention please to go thro' once my ON HIS GRAVE
This is a lovely poem by a man who appreciates silence, like me. Bob
am able to admire the day’s beauty- The far distant mountains before me; Like a train from a tunnel emerging I have returned to the lap of creation. It’s a beautiful poem, Matt. Reading it in this summer afternoon here is really very comforting. Images are so real that I can see just in front of my eyes and after all this wonderful imagery returning to the lap of creation is just great. Best Regards Naseer
A brilliantly comforting piece Matt..the imagery is so cheerful..it paints a wonderful scenery in the readers mind..blessed by your calming words...10++
Matt, this is a nice explanation for a expression well done there luwi
beautiful and panoramic scenes. golden silence and solitude.happiness in family.bright imagery.nice poem. vted10 surya
the returning to the lap of creation, drowns us in a beautiful sensation a sensation of the swirling winds taking us to places that we've never been. this is what i see in this poem of yours. excellent write and an honor to have read it. a ten
A soothing and gentle poem about everyday life, finding time for solitude to reflect, savour the wonders of nature! Inspired write!