Alone Comments

A well-done work; perfect rhyme is not easy (may I suggest changing 'vein' to 'veins'. I believe today's end-rhyming standards allows this) . Just to take one stanza: 'Ive never been smart but i have a brain' -contradicted by the intelligence displayed by this poem's construction. 'I know I'm normal but feel insane' -this is what, I believe, most poets think and feel. So, it would seem you're on the right track (lol) . 'Not always right but I'm never wrong' -was the ambiguity in this line intentional or not? Either way, a piquant line. 'Overpowered by weakness to be strong' -very perceptive observation.