Monday, May 4, 2009

Alone Comments

Rating: 4.8

The night is long, the sky is dark,
The light of stars is so damn stark.
When I look up, I fill with fear,
If all we have is what lies here.
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Richard Stamper
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Dans Only 04 May 2009

You nearly lost me in the first stanza. The second stanza raised my curiosity. The last two drew me in for a superb finish. I loved the end.

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