Alone Comments

yeah... i always feel a little outside I know the people who are my friends would be happier if it was just them two except when they need me or if only one is there.... but if i am with them both i am alone even with them... locked inside because we are so different we barely relate....

They all say that your annoying, but you just lock away the pain. I can understand this feeling. And I pondered a little at the word 'annoying' Why it was chosen, subconciously or otherwise, by the author. Or if it is his own self portraying or what those'they' think of him. If it is the latter, which I suspect it is, you need not worry, Mikayla. Those are many poor souls and everywhere. You have expressed yourself fine here, but be strong and fight back with your pen and you will find an amazing weapon for you already possess a capable hand and an active brain. Good write and good luck. Aziz

all you have to ever be is you everyone is unique

My life is just like yours... Good writing

Very Nice poem... Love the lines and how you expressed the emotions.... Love it.....

very nice poem, you express all the emotion very well. I understand this poem and I can relate to it. good job.

a beautiful write up. keep it up. sometimes we feel alone, but we never really are: GOD IS ALWAYS THERE FOR US.

You know how to express your emotions in verse. It all makes sense to me and it makes an enjoyable read even though the subject is unhappy.

Alone on the dark side of the moon forever with the universe full of life.. living inside the dark side..of moon...iip

Very good points in this poem... that explains exactly what it's like.. to be alone... I can relate..

This is a very powerful poem. It really acuratly describes how it feels to be alone. Great work.

hi reader Yes it was a very truthful poem. Now a days people do not have time for them selves so how can they think of others. The Poem ALONE is the present life situation. good one

so very true......nicely expressed emotions.........its hard to be alone and hated by everyone......but over the years i have learned why cry for people who never really care for you......... good poem