Alone Comments

cud be written in a better way with expressing ur feelings using poetic devices so as to make the poem more interesting, correct one line.... 'i can make into AN art' read my poem, All Alone! ! ! m sure u'll get to know what is loneliness exactly about...

but when u are hurt and scared with fear will there be a cear to the illness I have in my heart I can make it into a art.......if that stage comes in life thenit is preferred always to be alone.it consoles sometimes... finepiece of writing.....10 read mine cry not...you go alone

Terrific insight for one so young...keep up the good work...Jeff.

Thank you for the comment on my poem, You write in a unique way, I can see the beauty behinde your poem.

i sense love trying to break through words. good write marcella.

It's a pleasure to read such honest and heartfelt poem. Keep up the good job and thanks for sharing.

rather be alone with no friends still not the end.......................a friend with good heart yet friend indeed, that truly melts the loneliness.beautiful expression of choice by friendship, wellpenned,10 fro me.thanks for sharing