James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Sunday, July 12, 2009

Alone Comments

Rating: 4.5

Alone; from that fountain, Since spring now sprung;
My childhood birthed, back into passions room.
As others have, all gone over and into again
and I must now pass again alone, and afraid.
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James McLain
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Anjandev Roy 03 September 2024

Justly brilliant piece........ thanks for sharing.....

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Patti Masterman 18 August 2009

This is an elegant poem. I always hold my breath; reading somebody new, because I have a feeling I am inhaling somebody's soul then, and with you the feeling is very strong.

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Marieta Maglas 12 July 2009

it is an exceptional poem thereby almost perfect communication between man and nature..10+++ from me

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beautiful sad write, ...

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Ejaz Khan 12 July 2009

A beautiful write, though I don't think that each and every thing stems from childhood, we're very complicated beings with very mysterious compositions of both mind and bodies.

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Catrina Heart 12 July 2009

poignancy have here swelling the page...nice one!

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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