Saturday, February 14, 2009

Alone Comments

Rating: 5.0

Alone
The wind blows hard as the sky grows dark. The moon shines full; a lazy halo surronds it becuas eif the swirling mist.
Lights are out, streets are quiet. I am alone.
The world is silent. The darkness moves. Nothing at all is here.
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Vanessa Kingsley
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Siddharth Singh 28 July 2009

Very well written, lonliness is killing.

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oh! ! ! really dark.... alone...... wonderfully written..... i just like it.... go on! ! ! !

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Anita Wisniewska 12 April 2009

very macabre hope just fantasy!

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Vinod Kumar 17 February 2009

A Present Perfect picture of the Past mid aged globe, thanks,10+

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Vanessa Kingsley

Vanessa Kingsley

Colorado Springs, Colorado
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