Alone Comments

The whole world to care But you are not aware CP

Filled with emptiness and loaded with lonliness. Showing the suffering of a sad soul that is alone. Well done.

a shadow taunting me everywhere i turn. i feel alone in the big wide world! , , ........ loneliness siluhouettes by solitude love seems locked up in room of blue, , , as sky is alone by reeks of deep darkness gusty wind yet taunts by sadness..................excellent exposition of heart when emptied of love, sadness flows crippling passion, wrugt ingenious by sadness, well penned,10+++++, thanks for sharing

The presentation here is excellant for this poem. There is very little to say in words so it doesn't take many. The three verses are used well. GW62