Tuesday, May 5, 2009

Alone Comments

Rating: 3.3

Broken promises, Shattered dreams,
Dead emotion, Heartless uncaring devotion,
All thrown in my face.
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clayton young
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Coreena Lindquist 01 December 2009

i liked it! ! very creative at the words chosen!

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Empty promises and empty hearts, Broken bones and angry Tones… we are all alone.... barentruth and fine write... beautifully descripted... well done reada mine 'You go all alone'

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Rose MaryB. 05 May 2009

..your not that alone buddy.. im here! lol jp but man love the creativity with the words like 'dead emotion' i like it

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